I think the run-on sentence can be abused as a method of writing sex scenes -- and there are certainly other techniques that work, see Elizabeth Benedict's The Joy of Writing Sex! -- but it works for me, even though it also feels like cheating.
And I suppose if you get the reader panting and gasping, you're halfway there.
Your comment is not a 'really boring essay'! It's a discussion, and one that has grabbed my attention. So there.
And I have dedicated this (http://www.livejournal.com/users/viva_gloria/115992.html) to you ...
(Actually, there's another one in the works, just need to read it through without suffocating!)
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And I suppose if you get the reader panting and gasping, you're halfway there.
Your comment is not a 'really boring essay'! It's a discussion, and one that has grabbed my attention. So there.
And I have dedicated this (http://www.livejournal.com/users/viva_gloria/115992.html) to you ...
(Actually, there's another one in the works, just need to read it through without suffocating!)